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Post by Chloe on Sept 18, 2011 22:44:19 GMT -5
Hey!
Umm well cud y'all comment and tell me how I shud make my chara more realistic?
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 18, 2011 23:07:10 GMT -5
If you're asking because she hasn't been accepted yet and you're worrying that she may be a problem, I'm pretty sure that the reason why she hasn't been accepted is because Luki, once again, IS NOWHERE TO BE SEEN
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 18, 2011 23:09:52 GMT -5
"She is very wimpy but has high metabolism."
...well, first of all, grammar is a must as being wimpy and having a fast metabolism does not compliment one another in a sentence, making the sentence through off readers.
As well as if you are bulimic, you do not have a fast metabolism. Otherwise if you're bulimic and you have a fast metabolism, you're dead....seriously.
Fast metabolism means that your body burns energy faster, thus, when you consume food, your body breaks down the food quicker. If your body has a fast metabolism but no food to break down PLUS being bulimic, your metabolism will burn holes in your stomach...
And if she can barely lift ten pounds, she wouldn't be able to walk, she'd be in a hospital bed being fed by a tube all day...
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 18, 2011 23:10:31 GMT -5
dzetsu: He was here earlier today. 
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 18, 2011 23:30:51 GMT -5
HE WAS??? MAN I MISS THINGS
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 18, 2011 23:36:18 GMT -5
lol.
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 19, 2011 0:08:22 GMT -5
Skin color = Normal
What is normal skin color? Do you mean fair skin? Dark skin? Ghostly Pale Skin? Pale skin?
I think you mean "eczema" instead of "exima".
I was also hoping that perhaps you can start writing in paragraphs? Is that alright? It might help readers understand more. Plus, when you write in paragraphs like a story format, you start to add details that are actually much more helpful to readers. <3
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 19, 2011 0:12:17 GMT -5
What IS normal anyway? It depends on her race, I guess. Normal for her. Normal is but a standard of majority, though.
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 19, 2011 0:17:32 GMT -5
Also, because there's acne problems, I would say the skin color is more red...
And in the role play example, it seems like Koe is some sort of model or something or idol or so, but if she's got acne problem...wouldn't that cause a downfall in her fame?
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 19, 2011 0:20:02 GMT -5
And that's what make-up is for? LOL I guess she has a good facial structure, but bad skin, so they use make-up to cover her acne? ><b)
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Post by Chloe on Oct 30, 2011 15:56:17 GMT -5
COMPLETELY REDESIGNED!!!
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Post by Chloe on Oct 31, 2011 0:17:35 GMT -5
Anybody notice her personality and description changed kinda?
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Post by ★D3su-Face★ on Oct 31, 2011 2:00:48 GMT -5
I like the changes :'DD
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Post by Chloe on Oct 31, 2011 16:46:49 GMT -5
If she gets accepted her and Len could be beards!!!
LAWLZ
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Post by Chloe on Nov 9, 2011 19:52:00 GMT -5
 luki keeps getting on but she doesn't get excepted. |
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luki keeps getting on but she doesn't get excepted.