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Post by Chloe on Nov 9, 2011 19:52:36 GMT -5
No offense...
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Post by Chloe on Nov 9, 2011 19:52:56 GMT -5
Akward....
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Post by Chloe on Nov 10, 2011 8:30:44 GMT -5
I wuv u luki
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Post by Dream Adept on Nov 10, 2011 12:20:40 GMT -5
I likes the character =O To be honest, I agree with aeirwen on the paragraph thing, though I CAN understand your writing style pretty well already. As for your character, since you changed stuff already, it's pretty good. There really aren't any noticeable errors. And you got accepted! Yay!
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Post by jivavetiy on Jul 10, 2019 16:37:28 GMT -5
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Post by rodimizoetuje on Jul 10, 2019 18:58:48 GMT -5
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