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Post by Kagamine Rose on Sept 18, 2011 12:50:54 GMT -5
((XD! Awesome ending! That was absolutely awesome! This was like a written movie! C: Do a sequel! Please? XD ))
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 18, 2011 13:00:04 GMT -5
Eh, thank you. <3
Eh? A sequel? ...I don't know how.....
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Post by Kagamine Rose on Sept 18, 2011 13:50:19 GMT -5
I can help you...maybe a yeear into their relationshipo...C:<
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 18, 2011 14:46:12 GMT -5
Eh? A year? (If it even lasts....lol...)
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 19, 2011 20:40:40 GMT -5
Hm... Isn't a year after the relationship kind of boring for a sequel? I mean, there isn't much you can do. Unless you go uber fluffy, but that's just... No.
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 19, 2011 21:04:40 GMT -5
Yeah, I know, a year is kind of like.... "....yeah...I know already, you love me I love you, what more can we do?" There's not much until he decides to propose to Beth and that's kind of like...straying far away from their ages right now so...
Realistically...the more time couples spend with each other, the less romantic they tend to be...
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 19, 2011 21:09:41 GMT -5
The only thing you can do is make it unrealistically romantic, or you make it so something bad happens so they break up, and then there are numerous paths, which I all hate: Beth gets a new love and leaves Nathan behind, vice versa, both move on, they get back together (THE WORST ONE RIGHT THERE <== It's a bit... Like the chapter is unnecessary?), both end up alone (as far as the reader can tell) and learn a bunch of lessons. I say leave it off right now. It was a good story, and it deserves a godo ending.
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 19, 2011 21:12:55 GMT -5
Yeah, sometimes, a story leaves a much better impression the way it is. The hardest thing in stories is having a sequel that is better than the original and you can tell from all those disney movies with sequels. So.... I'd like to just leave them as is and leave their future relationship a mystery.
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Post by lyme on Sept 19, 2011 23:11:07 GMT -5
I am SO sorry that I haven't been able to read it yet. I only have the time to read what I can too update, then run. My addiction to Orochi Warriors is taking my time away. I need to quit a bit to get the time to read this.. I feel awful. ;n;
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 20, 2011 0:03:33 GMT -5
Ah, no, it's cool. You don't even have to read this if you don't want to. <3
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 20, 2011 0:10:58 GMT -5
Eh? But she SHOULD!
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 20, 2011 0:18:12 GMT -5
Eh...she should what...? ...read....this....? She doesn't have to if she doesn't want to....
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Post by dzetsu on Sept 20, 2011 0:20:48 GMT -5
She's next to me, and she said she wants to. www But she should read it.
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Post by ai-shi-te on Sept 20, 2011 0:26:56 GMT -5
Ehh..okay.....startingtofeelembarrassedofsuchastorynow.....
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