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Post by dzetsu on Jul 11, 2011 21:33:06 GMT -5
Iroha closed her eyes and gleefully smelled the Osakan air. It smelled like city. Ew. She coughed before giggling and spinning around. OSAKA! She was in Osaka!
In her gleeful spins, she almost walked into the street and got hit by a passing by car. The car beeped angrily as the driver inside gave her a rude gesture. Maybe getting lost in elation was a bad idea.
Hiyama sighed. Babysitting wasn't his idea of fun, and one of the babysittees almost just got run over.
"Come on, guys," he called to the rest of the troupe, "Let's go and eat lunch."
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Post by lyme on Jul 11, 2011 21:42:38 GMT -5
Yuuki had never been so excited in her life. Well, nine years wasn't much time to get excited over things, anyways. But besides the point.
Osaka! What a wondrous place! Yuuki heard many stories Osakan humor. And their funny dialect. Yuuki couldn't wait to hold a conversation with one an Osakan child. What would he/she say? She giggled at the thought of it.
Yuuki was so lost in her thoughts, that she almost took a wrong turn and separated from the group. That was, before Taito grabbed her shoulder and turned her around. Whew, close one.
Taito sighed. Why was he here again? Oh right, Yuuki dragged him there. His gang boss. It was hard to believe such a stupid, happy-go-lucky nine year old could actually be the leader of his gang, but that was fact, and there was nothing Taito could do about it.
Yuuki looked so stupid, humming and spinning and humming some more. Such an idiot. This is why Taito hated kids. Why was she so excited by another city anyways?
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Post by icecreamlord on Jul 11, 2011 22:04:11 GMT -5
Kaito looked around excitedly, happy to at the very least get out of the house. Taito had stuck him in cleaning that god-forsaken puddle of icecream ( which still wasn't gone ) until he'd given up and left. Soon afterward, the bluenette had left as well, and ended up following his older brother. An idiot? Yes.
"Kamaito-oneesama~!" He called aloud, looking back to the man- er, woman behind him, whom of which was quite happily strutting along in a pair of thigh-high fishnet stockings and a small black thong.
Said woman.. man.. thing nodded, looking out towards the group with a smile on his.. her.. it's face. "Oho~ Taito-kun~ Hiyama-kunnn~~ Come give Oneesama a little company~~~~"
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Post by dzetsu on Jul 11, 2011 22:17:39 GMT -5
Hiyama backed up. Slowly. In his head, the only thing he could think was, "FREAK FREAK FREAK FREAK FREAK FREAKKKK!"
If anyone was a bad influence on children, it was him. And Yuuki, a nine-year old was with them! Why was this guy allowed to walk in public? Hiyama couldn't believe that that thing was... coming closer! Eurgh!
"Good, morning... Onii-san?"
Iroha blinked in surprise at the he/she. She leaned over to ask Hiyama a question. "Is that a guy or a girl?"
"A guy."
"But, why the outfit?"
"A transvestite," Hiyama hissed. "Like the purple haired one in the park."
Iroha smiled at Kamaito. "Good morning, Mr. Transvestite!"
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Post by lyme on Jul 11, 2011 22:23:58 GMT -5
When Yuuki saw the...thing walk past her, the first thing she thought was, "OH GOD." As a short child, she got a full view of his ass. It was NOT a pleasant sight.
Taito, who had heard Kamaito's call, tried to ignore the tranny. As Kamaito passed, Taito muttered to him, "Change your outfit, or we don't know each other." And that was all.
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Post by lyme on Jul 26, 2011 2:53:49 GMT -5
Sorry, did I kill this thread? ;u;
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Post by dzetsu on Jul 27, 2011 21:05:58 GMT -5
Nah. It just died.
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Post by lyme on Jul 30, 2011 9:46:19 GMT -5
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE
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Post by Kagamine Rose on Jul 30, 2011 18:34:29 GMT -5
((I will later...))
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Post by Kagamine Rose on Aug 1, 2011 17:56:16 GMT -5
Ryu, a young ebony-haired girl sporting a pair of black short shorts, a white tee-shirt and black high-top converse, was seen strolling the streets of Osaka. The teen smiled and twirled around as she continued to stroll the streets.
Apparently it was her first time in Osaka and she was really happy. She had never been here before. She hoped her accomplice Neru was enjoying the air and new sights as much as she was.
The blond however didn't look as excited and joyful as Ryu did. But that didn't matter. Sighing the blond 'loid stopped to fix her appearance. She was sporting a yellow skirt accompanied with white leggings underneath, a white tank-top and yellow sandals. She looked rather normal.
"Hey Ryu! Wait a second!,"the blond yelled noticing that Ryu was ahead of her by what seemed to her a mile but it was actually 7 feet.
Smiling the shorter girl stopped and looked at her friend beckoning her to hurry up her pace. The blond sighed and started to run. Soon she had caught up with Ryu. Togehter they continued to walk down the streets of Osaka admiring the new sights.
Upon their walking they came upon Taito, Yuki, Kaito, and some other people. What were they doing here? Well whatever they were here for, Ryu would find out and follow them. Neru just looked at her briefly like she was crazy.
(I spell-checked about 5 times...I think I did good...what do you guys think? )
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Post by dzetsu on Aug 2, 2011 0:41:23 GMT -5
(It's good that your spelling has been corrected, but I should remind you that spelling is not the only error that can be corrected. When you reread your work, try to find out if things seem repetitive.
For example, while you were describing Neru and Ryu, you said both time that they were sporting a _____. Sporting therefore was used twice. It was not in succession, but you need to try to spice up your writing; use synonyms or describe it in a different way.
Don't feel bad, though. I'm simply giving you advice and tips to improve your writing. I have earned two writing awards in my career as a student, and I don't bother correcting and critiquing just everyone. Keep trying hard and you'll greatly improve.
Oh, and this is random, but it's not "I think I did good," but "I think I did well.")
Hiyama turned away from the transvestite and hoped to get the awful image of the man out of his mind. In his opinion, people, male OR female, although especially males, should not wear something so skimpy in public.
And then he saw some people he recognized. Two students. The two delinquent students. Hiyama hoped they would pass by and ignore him. Maybe they wouldn't see him there. He really didn't want to see problem students. Not at all.
There was no way these slackers would WANT to see their teacher on their short week of vacation. Golden week was meant for not doing homework and staying away from nagging teachers, right? Hiyama breathed a sigh or relief.
But unfortunately, his appeasement was short-lived; Ryu and Neru were clearly heading over to the teacher. Hiyama looked around, hoping to hide behind someone. Anyone would do. He almost hid behind the tranny when he realized that he was wrong.
He ducked behind Iroha, but unfortunately, she was too skinny to actually provide good refuge. Hiyama brown hair and suit was clearly visible from behind the pink Hello Kitty megawoman's suit.
Hiyama hoped they wouldn't see him and leave him alone. He hated these kids so much and didn't want to deal with them right now. Especially when he was on vacation.
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Post by lyme on Aug 2, 2011 23:24:12 GMT -5
Senna, updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate...................
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Post by dzetsu on Aug 2, 2011 23:36:08 GMT -5
Just skip her. It seems that she doesn't want to be a part of this RP anymore.
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Post by lyme on Aug 2, 2011 23:57:00 GMT -5
Taito examined the stores. What was there to do? Not much, really. He boredly examined random Osakan merchandise. It was a boring walk, until he noticed Ryu and her blonde friend.
Ryu was tucking her black hair behind her ear and giggling. Her friend sighed and her side ponytail shook as she straightened her white tank top. Turns out Ryu and her friend were in Osaka too. Ryu had a tendency to meet up with Taito. Why was that? _____________________________________________________________________________
Yuki shuddered at the ass that walked in front of her face. But Osaka was supposed to be fun, so she shrugged it off after a few minutes. Was there any Osakan delicacies to eat anytime soon?
(Rushed because Rose had to get kicked off @_@)
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Post by Kagamine Rose on Aug 3, 2011 0:03:38 GMT -5
Ryu smiled at Neru and noticed Taito. She smiled and ran up to him. Neru tagging along. Ryu also noticed Yuki and pulled her away from the person's butt. She smiled at her and then at Taito."Fancy meeting you two here...How's it been?,"the ebony-haired girl giggled.
Neru just rolled her eyes and examined the people. She then took notice of Hiyama trying to hide from them. She sighed and looked at Ryu."How come you know these crazy people?,"Neru asked.
Ryu had looked at her weirdly. Then shook it off."They aren't crazy...,"the teen smiled. Neru nodded slightly before her eyes settle on Taito. She had heard much about him from Ryu. He must've been the father-like figure for her. Hmm. She would have to innterigate him soon.
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